"No!" He said angrily: "I told me last time ~www.mtlnovel.com~ you can find screenwriters who are willing to be unsigned, and I can provide them with the story framework to improve the script, right?"
"Yes, as long as the price is enough, Hollywood is expensive and cheap. Except for the top part of the well-known screenwriters, the income of other screenwriters is not high, and some have enough food and clothing. They are very willing to be gunmen." Yeremov Reply.
"That's good, hire me a Chicago native who can go to Highland Park at night... Forget it, go to A+ Records and talk to me about the script, and work during the day. Don't find too cheap, just cost-effective."
"The screenwriter...price ratio...well, I will try my best." Yeremov said, "Let's talk in detail when get out of class is over."
"Okay, come to Highland Park."
Just put down the phone, Hallie's call came again.
"I have another question. What does Apple mean by issuing an announcement saying that it will pay 0.00429 dollars in dividend next month." Halle asked again.
"Dividend is to give a certain amount of cash per share... Oh, just remember this is a good thing." Song Ya became a little impatient, wouldn't it be possible to lie down and make money with the information I got from the future? Ask this and ask that, really!
"Good thing?"
"Good thing!"
"Well..." Halle hung up the phone in a daze.
When I went home and talked with Yeremov late into the night, the two of them ran through the outline of the story that danced my life. "It's the boss." Yeremov didn't dare to question anything, and agreed to go and get the gunman screenwriter right away.
In the early morning, Song Ya was sleeping soundly while holding Amy, when suddenly the landline bell on the bedside rang.
"Who? It's so late." He thought something serious had happened again, and quickly got up to answer the phone.
"I, Halle, the Helsinki exchange is open, Nokia..."
‘Hey! ’
Song Ya smashed the microphone back and tore off the phone line.
Chicago 1990 Chapter 414: Discussion about the script
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Money or money is still a trivial matter. Like Hallie, she talked to herself about the real-time stock market, who could bear it. Song Ya severely rebuked her the next day, but a phone call at the close of the day was inevitable. This situation lasted for half a month, and finally stopped after her fresh energy gradually passed.
"Probably that's it. The plot is not complicated, but there are a lot of songs and dances, so dance instructions are very important."
At night, the office of the president of A+ Records was brightly lit. Song Ya handed the printed first version of the script to Yeremov. Taraji, Hayden, and two gunmen screenwriters were also present, a forty-year-old white man. He and a black man in his thirties are both men, and they are not cheap. They are among the top batch of gunners who are willing to remain anonymous.
The black screenwriter was added later. In order to help modify the dialogue between the protagonist and his friends, he must not use too much Chicago black slang according to Song Ya’s original idea, which would make the foreign audiences fall into the clouds and fog, and not lose the taste of the street. , This is a street dance movie after all.
"Looking for a dance means that it is very late. Of course, if you really want to make this movie, you have to increase the amount of dance training."
Yeremov shook his head. The A+ Records Publicity Director picked up his old career in production and suddenly became more confident and directly took over the leadership of small meetings. "Okay, I believe everyone here has seen it. The script has been written more than once. Today, we will make it simple again. We will bring up our respective issues and brainstorm. Those areas still need to be revised. If you have anything to say, Mr. APLUS can withstand the blow."
They and Song Ya both laughed, "Let me just talk about it first." Yeremov didn't take the initiative when seeing the two screenwriters, and pointed to the opening paragraph in the script and asked: "Are there any considerations for the opening of this movie? He is too much like a MV. Now, the time for Showmethemoney is a bit slow."
"In the tall dance practice room, there is a ballet dancer in tight clothes and a street dancer in a messy street. The contrast between the two different scenes suggests two different classes. One belongs to the rich, introverted, and stereotyped female protagonist. , Refusing to change, a poor man, publicity, free movement, and full of vitality like a male protagonist."
Song Ya answered.
"It's not bad. This is a pavement for a series of drama conflicts caused by the differences in personality and cognition between the men and women behind because of the family environment and life philosophy." The white screenwriter put his hand to his mouth and said.
The black screenwriter also nodded, "I also think that the title is very relevant. The one side represented by the street dance and the other represented by the ballet, from not understanding each other, to conflict, and finally merged into a performance at the end of the film, echoed before and after."
"But it's still a bit..." Yeremov was not easily persuaded, and made a mark on the script. "This paragraph will be polished after the director is in place."
"guide……"
The black screenwriter looked at Song Ya in surprise, "Don't you really want to make a movie APLUS? There are so many dance scenes in this show, investment is indispensable."
"Why should I hire you if you don't make it into a movie!?" Song Ya replied quietly.
"It's time to shoot some small productions and practice hands." The white screenwriter asked Yeremov with a smile, "didn't you persuade him?"
Yeremov made a gesture of wiping his neck.
"My main concern is APLUS in terms of human design." The black screenwriter said: "Ngers from three poor families smashed the glass of the art school and stole the car. This kind of plot will not be liked by African-Americans."
"I think so." Taraji echoed.
Yeremov and the white editor also nodded.
Song Ya thought for a while, and indeed, the starring in the original movie was a white man, and the black people did not have any sensitive thoughts about these things with two black people, but didn't he want to be the leading role? So the editor was asked to write all three as black, and the question suddenly appeared, "I have to change it, how to say?"
"It doesn't matter if you smash the glass, car stealing can be changed to a relatively low crime level, such as...er, such as..." The black screenwriter didn't think of a suitable replacement plot for a long time. Obviously, it was written as robbery, trafficking, etc. Serious, and acts such as petty theft or bullying are more destructive than car stealing, not to mention that car stealing is also associated with a large plot before and after.
Setting the character background is a deep knowledge. The car is a dead thing. The discomfort of the audience watching the protagonist stealing the car is far lower than that of directly grabbing someone else's 20 dollars, although the value of a car is much higher than two. Ten knives do not know how many times.
The protagonist and his two partners are young people from slums and idlers. The movie must show the ubiquitous criminal life of the low-level youths who cannot get rid of the mud, but also cannot make the audience feel too much disgust.
It is very difficult to grasp this degree. The original movie has been set up very balanced. After a little change in the character setting, it will affect the whole body. In the original movie, the protagonist is a white man. It is not easy for the audience to steal the car with the white man. The association of ethnic crime rate is replaced by all black car stealing...
It is true that the black crime rate is high, but it cannot be photographed so straightforwardly. At that time, the black group will definitely attract a lot of scolding, not to mention that they have black ancestry, and they will be scolded more fiercely, ethnic traitors black skin and white heart. It must be indispensable.